Tuesday 22 November 2011

treatment pitch feedback

Our group were filmed pitching to Mr Lawes,Miss O'dell and the rest of our class mates.We received some feedback for our audience:

Good Feedback on our idea-They said that our idea was well planned out and our thoughts on the opening sequence were clearly put across during the pitch.Our idea would definitely go along with the stereotypical theme of the gangster genre.It was also very efficient on presenting what the target audience the film will look to appeal to.Male audience.Mr Lawes and Miss O'dell told us that they could tell we had carried out our research into the genre as our conventions were the same as films such as goodfellas with the monologue throughout the footage.They also believe that the way we keep the character mysterious is very effective.

Constructive Feedback on our idea- The monologue needs to be very appealing and well scripted to keep the audience entertained throughout the whole 2 minutes.we also need to consider whether we be able to film in london due to security restrictions

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